in the last two weeks I got to write a report on what I liked. I chose to write about spring because it is a great time for playing outside. First I planned my paragraphs. Then I researched facts I didn't have and put them into my report.
Please open the link to my report and comment if you think I have done a good job.
Hi Maddy, I really liked the picture of the flowers. They made me think of spring. My connection with spring is that my birthday is at the beginning of spring! Next time maybe you could make your paragraphs a little longer. Blog you later!
ReplyDeleteHi Daniel,thank you for commenting on my blog. I can see you like spring because your birthday is then, me too! thanks for feedback, next time I will add more in my paragraphs.
DeleteHi Maddy,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the flowers on the picture it reminds me of going to one tree hill at the first day of spring. Next time maybe you could add more information to tell and me more about spring!
Blog ya later!
Blog ya later!
Kia Ora Madeline I'm Amara. I really liked the way that you used paragraphs and did some reasearching about spring. Also that you planned before you did your writing. Maybe next time you could add some more information about the season Spring. What made you want to write about Spring?
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